He is right. I Hope you can enjoy the positive feedback, which many do not here. I had to learn.
The facial features, or lack of, do let them down. The rest is great. You have shown these at a high magnification, which is very unforgiving!
It is so, simply, incredibly, simple. Paint the face in a thin coat of summat "flesh"…..so many different shades. Even acrylic, too thick, will obscure the features, if laid on thickly.
Then a darker wash. Add a drop of washing up liquid and see it flow into every crevice.
Then highlight the nasal bridge, the zygomatic ridge and the chin. Even if only with the original base colour. Forget the rest, the eyes, the eyebrows, the lips (too easily overdone)….would totally transform these figures. Remember how our brains are hard wired to see faces in anything.
But then, your grey horse (Vexy, ridden by Slender Billy) is brilliant, I love your bases (I thought I had the monopoly on them from work with a Zeiss operating microscope) and the ground work.
Faces….All you need is Tallarn Flesh and an Ogryn Wash…but they are worth their weight in gold.
What would I pay for an unopened bottle of both? I am down to the dregs………7 years old