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ScottWashburn Sponsoring Member of TMP25 Feb 2014 1:19 p.m. PST

I was reading an advertisemnet for a game and encountered this:

"In ******, players carefully create and move their forces as they capture territories and expand their empires. A player's skill and strategy are all that stand between him and ultimate victory!"

So, if I'm reading this correctly then your skill and strategy are what will PREVENT you from winning. So this is a game for dimwits?

The ad needs editing, I think :)

Gavin Syme GBS Sponsoring Member of TMP25 Feb 2014 1:22 p.m. PST

Yes…it is a negative inflected statement. 'are all that STANDS between' would have changed it for the better.

GBS
15mm.co.uk

Personal logo MrHarold Sponsoring Member of TMP25 Feb 2014 1:31 p.m. PST

So, if I'm reading this correctly then your skill and strategy are what will PREVENT you from winning

Isn't that often the case?

Big Red Supporting Member of TMP25 Feb 2014 1:34 p.m. PST

Its the case for me!

Todd63625 Feb 2014 2:24 p.m. PST

I think we live in a day and age that if MS Word doesn't put it in red it must be OK.

OSchmidt25 Feb 2014 2:38 p.m. PST

The fault of poor editing is not totally attributable to the fault of computer software. Twenty years ago I was reading a volume of the "Hornblower" series when I came across the sentence

"Hornblower braced himself on the heaving duck."

Personal logo Extra Crispy Sponsoring Member of TMP25 Feb 2014 3:03 p.m. PST

Was it a goose?

plutarch 6425 Feb 2014 3:06 p.m. PST

Or the type of thing that can occur when you spend too long at sea?

Henrix25 Feb 2014 3:27 p.m. PST

Poor duck. Probably seasick.

15th Hussar25 Feb 2014 5:53 p.m. PST

Gentlefolk,

Almost all of your comments generated a few good honest chuckles out of me…and I needed them.

Thank you all!

(Leftee)25 Feb 2014 7:11 p.m. PST

What a canard! That can't be true. Bile filled duck – Pure quackery.

StarfuryXL525 Feb 2014 7:23 p.m. PST

Poor duck. Probably seasick.

Or in the throes of ecstasy. evil grin

Bashytubits25 Feb 2014 8:15 p.m. PST

All right, who stepped on the duck?

platypus01au26 Feb 2014 4:20 a.m. PST

God knows how many times I've snatched a duck* from between the jaws of victory…..

Cheers,
JohnG
*or defeat

Gustav27 Feb 2014 7:09 a.m. PST

Heaving duck ?
it was just wrutten in a Kiwi axsunt….

:)

Personal logo Bobgnar Supporting Member of TMP27 Feb 2014 11:49 a.m. PST

"In ******, players carefully create and move their forces as they capture territories and expand their empires. A player's skill and strategy are all that stand between him and ultimate victory!"

I'm not so sure this is really bad. Isn't it saying that the quality of the player's skill and strategy are what stand between him and victory. Of course in a wargame luck is what usually stands between a player and victory. The quote is saying that it's not luck but skill and strategy that are between losing and winning.

WaltOHara27 Feb 2014 12:31 p.m. PST

And yet, despite Catalyst Games' poor editing, I find myself contemplating purchase.

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